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April 16th, 2011


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11:14 pm - Flist Thoughts?
Okay...since 3 of you told me that I shouldn't care what others think of what I post on here, I'm posting this. It's not done, nor is it even close to being done. But, thought I'd run it by my Flist and get some thoughts on it. What should he being talking about? What should the title be? How do you think it should go? How do you think it should end? Does there need to be more imaginative romance it? Does he see her like she sees him? Things like that. Anyway, here goes:

Addie sat in the red winged chair, listening as Josh regaled everyone with his stories. As the fire flickered behind him, she just stared at him. There was something about Josh that truly intrigued Addie and she found herself completely entranced by him. Addie discovered it was hard to concentrate on what Josh was saying, so she simply sipped her tea and nodded every so often as he spoke.

Josh's blue eyes sparkled as he talked. His voice seemingly sing-songed as he spoke and Addie imagined that was what an angel talking must sound like and a small sigh escaped her lips before she could stop it. She turned away, blushing, afraid that Josh had heard the sigh.

Indeed, he had, but he simply smiled a crooked smile as he looked over at Addie. Not wanting to embarass the auburn haired beauty any further than she felt, he contined to his story.


That's all for now. Now...comment with your opinions on what you think should be next...in the story, etc...
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From:saxokitty
Date:April 17th, 2011 07:48 pm (UTC)
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That was cute! I think that this could develop into a really sweet relationship.

I'm not sure what direction you have in mind, but I can see it becoming something where.... Like, lots of women flock after Josh, cause he seems to be something very handsome as you described, but he picks out Addie from the crowd. If you want it to be a bit more complicated, you could have it so Josh is already in a relationship with someone, but he wants to work around it so he can get to know Addie some more. And the whole time Addie is just oblivious and tries to hide that she is so intrigued by the man. :)
Those are my thoughts/ideas. I'm sure whatever direction it takes, it'll be great.
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From:navy_brat_1972
Date:April 17th, 2011 07:49 pm (UTC)
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I like your ideas. *Wheels start turning...,*

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